Wednesday, February 3, 2010

CHANGING...


A slight change,
Barely even noticable,
Barely even understandable,
But a change nevertheless,
Her heart is soaring,
Her spirit is rising,
Her passion is burning,
The walls are cracking,
But why is she fighting so hard?
Why is she holding onto something that has to go?
Because this transitory road is not without its obstacles,
The unknown is what scares the soul,
But she can hide no longer,
For the time to wake up has come,
Now before her eyes the walls have smashed,
The passion within has soared uncontrollably,
Consuming her with an intensity too powerful to fight,
Now all she can do is give in,
And become the passion HERSELF,
For she is no longer a child,
BUT A WOMAN FROM WITHIN.

12 comments:

AubintheDark said...

Well said.

GYPSYWOMAN said...

just beautiful, deboshree - a real breakthrough in terming to terms with "it" and "self" and the integration of the two! really beautifully said!

and HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY again, belated as it may be!

Deboshree said...

@Aubin- Thank you chotu ^_^

@Jenean- Hehe..I was rather ambiguous previously, right? I could feel this in me and the feeling has been intensifying with time.Everything is felt with much more depth and lord knows if that will be good for me. But that's the way I have come to be.

Thanks for the wishes! ^_^ It's the thought that counts..not the time and I know your wishes come from the heart, so thank you my dear friend.

Lots of love
Deboshree

suzicate said...

One word...lovely!

Shadow said...

this is outstanding. freeing. be who she can be...

Deboshree said...

@suzicate- Thanks! ^_^

@Shadow- I will. I will. Too many chains. Too many hurdles. Time to break free now.

Love
Deboshree

epasen said...

<3 Beautiful.

Keep me posted with what you decided love!

Love,
Emmi

Deboshree said...

@Emmi-
Thanks love. I will surely keep you posted. Promise babe.

xoxo
Deboshree

Nancy said...

I agree with AubintheDark and Gypsywoman - they have expressed all that I felt when reading this. Well done.

Deboshree said...

@Nancy- Thank you my friend :-)

Tom Bailey said...

This is powerful. It reads like something very transformational.

Thanks for sharing it.

Tom

Deboshree said...

@Tom- It is transformational. Thanks for dropping by ^_^

Regards
Deboshree